I have always wanted to draw this crossover. A lot of people got to it before me, but... I had to do it, anyway.
This pic is for Ash. <3
Edit: Since a lot of people are commenting on it.... why WOULDN'T Marceline be the Rosebride? PB is a beloved noble prince(ss), Marceline is ancient, tormented by her past, and has paranormal powers. All this kerfuffle because y'all don't like Marceline in a dress. I THINK SHE'S KYEWT.
This is great work! I never seen or heard of the manga, Revolutionary Girl Utena, but it might have been a good manga. This looks like a great resemblance. Revolutionary Girl Utena is an example of Yuri, and this looks like pure shipping. I guess Marcie is the one wearing the dress, and Bonnie with the naval suit. I believe your drawings on Adventure Time looks very similar. The works show you are a true Adventure Time fan, and so am I. I imagine the show to be Tim-Burton-esque. Anyway, keep up the good work. Have fun drawing, I know.
Concept is very strong here and I think you did a great job of knocking it out of the park. Dark color tones can be hard to work with. [and given your normally bright style] making things pop would be a bit of a challenge I feel. This seemed to be a bit out of your comfort zone. Which is a great way to expand. Blending the two areas this is based off did go very seamless, so good job there.
Areas that can be worked on I feel are just making a few areas pop a bit more. Marceline's hair is very flat. This could work if Bubblegum's wasn't as detailed. I don't know if this is because time was an issue or not. I would spend more time if you have it on adding more depth with the lighting. Mostly in the outer parts. It's got that Alphonse Mucha feel to it at this stage.
Bubblegum's dress doesn't need more detail as much as lighting should maybe be re worked a bit. It seems like the light source is only from the center of the work but when you look at her dress' ends it has a reflected light on it. As in there's light bouncing off something back up. But she's in space. Would the light be bouncing off something? I think that extra light on the ends would work if it was flaring out but given the darker shadings shape it does not appear to be so on the front parts.
Now these are very small things when looking at the over all work but reworking them will really add to it.
Areas that can be worked on I feel are just making a few areas pop a bit more. Marceline's hair is very flat. This could work if Bubblegum's wasn't as detailed. I don't know if this is because time was an issue or not. I would spend more time if you have it on adding more depth with the lighting. Mostly in the outer parts. It's got that Alphonse Mucha feel to it at this stage.
Bubblegum's dress doesn't need more detail as much as lighting should maybe be re worked a bit. It seems like the light source is only from the center of the work but when you look at her dress' ends it has a reflected light on it. As in there's light bouncing off something back up. But she's in space. Would the light be bouncing off something? I think that extra light on the ends would work if it was flaring out but given the darker shadings shape it does not appear to be so on the front parts.
Now these are very small things when looking at the over all work but reworking them will really add to it.
Good job!
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