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P.5 Redrawn by Yamino P.5 Redrawn by Yamino
Page 5, original VS updated.

Man, this took longer than I thought it would. I had to redraw the whole thing. I even changed some of the dialogue. XD
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:icondemondgust:
DemondGust Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
well what do you know, there WAS enough room to swing a cat
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:iconozkumeti:
Ozkumeti Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
My GOD do I miss the old stuff! </3 It was so inspiring. Please, please, PLEASE tell me you have the old comics! I would be devastated to see it gone. ;__;
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:iconvinea:
Vinea Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2011
I prefer the old Catherine because she seems more motherly and soft...
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:iconseyo-tsukino:
seyo-tsukino Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Student Digital Artist
amazing... but a question... is there any way of reading the whole story?? :P
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:iconyamino:
Yamino Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Yes, it's all on my site, www.sisterclaire.com =)
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:iconscarecrow-chan:
Scarecrow-Chan Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011
Very big difference, love it.
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:iconwirt4:
Wirt4 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2011
Hmm, shades of Herge (except without the whole "now in color" thing)
Love the newer tone separation in the last panel, somehow makes it feel more night-like. And the re-lettered sound effects (and the absense of 'em in panel 3) really add to the better, deliberate pacing. I also like the new cut of the habit. Somehow, that's more appealing (and I don't think it has anything to do with boobs).

For some reason, the rosaries look less solid, like teething rings or something.
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:iconmoncappy:
MonCappy Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2011
It's interesting to see a comparison between the original page and the newer version. I'd have to say that the newer version is superior overall and much closer to your current style for the webcomic than the original. Do you plan to redraw all the pages eventually?

The dialogue in the newer version feels more natural than the original as well. Catherine's current design is far superior to the original. While the loss of boobage is regrettable, the trade off for superior character design makes up for it. Another detail I find notable is how much better Claire's facial expressions are illustrated in the newer version of the page in contrast to the original. To be blunt; Claire's expression in the original version of panel one looks awful compared to the revised page.

I am definitely liking the revised page quite a bit. I think you should keep both versions so others can see just how far you've come in the development of your artistic skills since you began publishing the webcomic.
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:iconmegturney:
megturney Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
Looks fantastic! I do miss the boobs, though..
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:iconyamino:
Yamino Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Lol, everyone seems to miss the boobs! XD

It's because I wanted to make her transition to being pregnant more obvious, and naturally she's not super curvy. She'll have boobs later, I promise. And there's always Gabrielle, she's boobalicious all the time.
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:iconmegturney:
megturney Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
I love that everyone pointed out the boobs! :lmao:
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:iconyamino:
Yamino Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Slightly related: I just noticed your ICON looks like a dancing purple boob! XD
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:iconmegturney:
megturney Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
Boobs, boobs, everywhere!
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:iconsaya-aria:
Saya-Aria Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
Major difference, in a good way!
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:iconcldaishi:
CLDaishi Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
my favorite part is how you took out Clarie's boobs :D haha i dont know why but thats the first thing i noticed.
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:iconpopcorncomics:
popcorncomics Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Student General Artist
Wow, that looks a lot better lol
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:iconbatlesbo:
batlesbo Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
The difference is amazing. Even more here than the last page. Keep up the good work!
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:iconkeystar01:
Keystar01 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2011
Wow. Just wow.
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:icongroundedgypsy:
GroundedGypsy Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Student General Artist
rofl I remember this page XD
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:iconthe-dragon-girl:
The-Dragon-Girl Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
looks good :)
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:iconasigna:
asigna Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Student Writer
The mouth at the top on the updated, it just doesn't seem to fit? The top left corner of her mouth seems a bit too high.
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:iconsehibzeh:
Sehibzeh Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
I prefer the old Catherine... sexyer, growr...
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:iconyamino:
Yamino Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
...Really? She looks like an alien to me.
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:icontopologist:
Topologist Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
A sexy alien, though :D
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:iconsehibzeh:
Sehibzeh Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
NAY!!! Sexyer nun I've seen in my life... but, then again, all the others are a litle... old...
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:iconpronouns:
Pronouns Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Student General Artist
You have gotten SO much better at expressions. <3
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:iconknifeyutensil:
KnifeyUtensil Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
You also covered up Sister Kathrine's chest.. xD

I think the dialogue is much better now :3 It seems more natural and less choppy.
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:icondiespitris:
Diespitris Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Claire's boobs shrunk!
O__O
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:iconthe-paid-assassin:
the-paid-assassin Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist
haha, i didn't even notice that until you pointed it out!!
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