beautiful composition, a very interesting approach to paneling, it's very creative. However, I do admit I was a little confused on which way to read the panels. My eyes have the tendency to follow downward, then to the cliff scene. I thought Fionna was gonna commit suicide at first. To help clarify this, I would suggest showing the pit from an aerial view and having the bits of the crown sparkle from the bottom or have the ice queen looking down over the edge and in the snow you could show how she used her last out ounce of strength to chase after the crown. By doing this, it would give distance between her and Fionna leaving the scene. Minor things that could totally boost the quality another notch. I'm really enjoying this approach to paneling.
perfecto solo eso puedo decir, era lo menos que podía hacer fionna después de lastimar a cake y de ser tan maldita tan solo admiro el odio y el valor que pones en los ojos de fionna cuando la amenaza con la espada en la primer toma y la frialdad con la que destruye la tiara de esa maldita
excelente trabajo por favor continua un aplauso
o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o oo o
I think that's a nice touch that she decides not to actually kill her, but destroy what she lives for. From the first comic, I get the impression she planned on beheading her, but then she doesn't. That's interesting.
solo eso puedo decir, era lo menos que podía hacer fionna después de lastimar a cake y de ser tan maldita
tan solo admiro el odio y el valor que pones en los ojos de fionna cuando la amenaza con la espada en la primer toma y la frialdad con la que destruye la tiara de esa maldita
excelente trabajo por favor continua un aplauso
o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o oo o
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