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Demon Girl

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Another character design practice. I'd like some feedback on the design, not necessarily on the drawing's quality (it's a colored sketch.)
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I kinda like (though am a bit blinded by) the neon outlines to her hair. It definitely gives it that glowing effect. The only downside is that as the only colored lines, it looks a little odd with the rest of the black-outlined parts. The eyes kind of unnerve me too, and not in a good way. They're so unnatural, that it really sets me off from the character. Now, as a background character, I can see that making sense, but as someone relatable? A little off-putting. Then again, that could just be me. I love how she's essentially a silhouette. That is a fascinating look. Also, the too-wide mouth is a great effect.